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    dots Submission Name: Set It Straight(PROlifik)dots
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    Author: PROlifik
    ASL Info:    23/m/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.01 - 23/28/21
    Words: 660
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 940
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 3802



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       Collaboration With SINceer05
    Check his verse on his posts page.


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    dotsSet It Straight(PROlifik)dots
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    (Chorus-SINceer)
    Real as fact when we hit the track
    Running through the underground with a verse on our back
    Haters know how to act
    When we come around they feel us like a Hundred pounds
    And the Heat is brung like Wade we got you looking dumb,
    just let it fade to the drum

    cancel your last post,man im past dope
    you remain on your last rope,one more response that will be ya last hope
    so dont underestimate the duo -we run ya favorites list and thats true yo
    numero-uno...you KNOW,better get a new flow cuz its true ho you'll loose tho
    even fools show they know the rules yo- so witness me take em to school tho
    just keep the lights low you dike ho -couldnt even hold your own on a promo
    you homo-on the mic ima pro YO,aint puttin up with it no more-you are NOT hard-core
    rhymes i got far more,just expressin thoughts -thats what these bars for
    you lucky if you escape with your populairty if you stay daring me
    bullshit...you aint scaring me,we uphold ourselves to be a rareity
    apparently you better pull a +jay-z+ and search for that +moment of clarity+
    so battle us PLEASE gotta style potent like marijuana leaves
    have you anticipatin our arrival like it was chirstmas eve,by any means
    as easy as it seems i still got enough game to get ya girl outta her lucky jeans
    red beams and tripple beams fuck with us we cripple teams
    we just watin to break out man we bustin at the seams it seems
    we gonna leave ya with scary dreams-very mean you stupid fiend-we keep the rhymes very clean
    fuckin levetate your fate when we grippin the weight,alter your vision when we flippin threw crates
    you aint got what it takes you fakes-better plan your wakes,we jumpin on every single one of your mistakes
    so continue to fiend for this,we'll bleed for this-weed and cris a spot on your favorites list
    you need US- stepped right in the game a lyrical genioUS so please believe US
    with open arms just recieve US or bleed if you decieve US +all of em lost souls and we there jesus+
    spittin ona track where we meant to brag- time to let em know this rap shit is in the bag
    in fact we attack with enough raps to bring fans of tupac back its time to put +CH+ back on the map
    so you can pack ya whack crap back to ya studio and continue to lack a real track-ya feel that??
    SINceer and PROlifik the most gifted system in the game just spreadin wisdom
    so yall cant hate us,defanitly give thanks -yalls comments made us- made it so haters still cant fade us
    been a minute since we back thanks for the patience and a chance for us to make this
    time for us to awake hits and destroy all makeshift fake shit as we create hits -the game is up for grabs and we gonna take this and break this so make way for this or just stay away from this
    make the wrong beef and catch a stray in this while we sprayin this we barely miss
    once we get the beat in our headphones ya dead wrong-said strong
    once the pen hits...another classic song,2 kids from Virginia who thought we would last this long


    (chorus #2-PROlifik)
    holdin it down for +ill street blues+,we will rip ya crews-so fuck you fools
    proved once or twice we+unbreakable+ so dont go and do the unthinkable
    we just here to +set it straight+ and diss your demo tape so fuck your hate
    from the +history of me+ to the history of we,to you we still a myst-ery deleiverin mis-ery
    so heres +the antedote+ with no +side effects+ its +vintage unflitered+
    back usin exsesive force we will leave a corpse-fuck the magazine we +the source+




    Submitted on 2006-04-09 04:43:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      BRAVO! Alright alright....hold it down. do your thang...don't hurt nobody!

    I don't think that ANY lyricist will ever be able to pull Tupacs fans out of the closet. They will forever remain there. He was a lyrical Prophet...all we have any more is just lyricists. No one will ever be able to replace that. NO ONE!

    He was a dying cause to the rap game. And many try to be that image....never gonna happen.

    You have mad skills. I'm feeling your words!

    Much love,

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2006-04-10 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      Money..

    The chorus was a nice touch though...And the verse carries the track.. I liked the way it turned out. But at the same time i might have to revise me verse a lil bit after reading yours..

    PC
    | Posted on 2006-04-09 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey bubz, im luvin your work, its a lot more hard core than your other stuff, likin ur flow and yes you r still numero-uno
    keep em cummin
    kyrenia
    x x x x
    | Posted on 2006-04-19 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]


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