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    dots Submission Name: Broken insidedots
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    Author: tina_mik
    ASL Info:    17/f/malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 21/22/20
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 176
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    Description:
       how i felt after getting the best results in my life...


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    dotsBroken insidedots
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    With a smile she returns,
    Hoping heads will turn,
    to witness her success,
    At what she does best.

    but how wrong she was
    her happines never last,
    for joy was shared,
    too short she regret

    her heart starts aching,
    her heart starts breaking
    but not a word she said,
    nor did she seek for aid

    on her bed she lies,
    with tears in her eyes
    lonely tears she cried,
    true feelings she hides




    Submitted on 2006-04-09 09:00:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You took the words right out of my mouth, thats how I feel in 4 paragraphs. The first paragraph reeled me in because it started off happily. Just like Romeo and Juliet it starts of happy(in a Shakespeare way) then gets sadder and sadder. I loved it. Keep writing.
    | Posted on 2006-04-11 00:00:00 | by Sarah J | [ Reply to This ]



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