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wondering


Author: Kaila Turley
ASL Info:    15/F
Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 52 /43 /18
Words: 85
Class/Type: Poetry /Happy
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signals sent but nothing is for sure


wondering



Wondering
Between how we seem to act
Or what we tend to say
Maybe it’s the way we flirt
But somehow you always find a was you leave me
Wondering

We send so many signals
I’ve laughed till’ I cried
You make stupid jokes
But when its time to hang up I’m still
Wondering

Do you like me?
Or am I just like a best friend?
Answer these from me so I will not be
Wondering




Submitted on 2006-04-09 09:18:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  from what you said in the poem, id say he liesk you, but see im over the computer ill never knwo what really goes on so maybe next time call him up and ask! anyways back to the poem i liked it i loved the wondering. just that end line for everything was real good.
| Posted on 2006-04-09 00:00:00 | by crazzybeautiful | [ Reply to This ]
  I do believe I know who this is about, and I hope you find out what's going on between you two. . I'm glad you finally got some new poems up. Keep writing Kawa, and I'll keep reading them. I'm glad you have had some good days lately. Have phone at the drag races. Keep it up Kawa
Love ya
xoxoxo
=Logan=
| Posted on 2006-04-09 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ]
  Are guys so confusing? Lol. It was a pretty good write, I thought it had a nice flow. I think the last stanza meshes in really well, because its kind of summing it all up. In the first stanza, the 5th line doesnt seem to make sense. Great poem, i'll be sure to read more of yours soon!
inkpen
| Posted on 2006-04-09 00:00:00 | by inkpen | [ Reply to This ]


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