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    dots Submission Name: Nomaddots
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    Author: kblyric
    ASL Info:    32/F/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 331/227/29
    Words: 302
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 719
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    Description:
       This is something I wrote after attending the nomadic museum presentation of "ashes and snow' by Gregory Colbert. An amazing experience. If you get an opportunity to go, take it. It WILL move you.


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    dotsNomaddots
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    I am a nomad in this land
    this land of love
    I know this territory
    It is familiar as the earth beneath my fingertips
    the sand that kisses my face in the restless wind
    Yes
    I know this place
    I have traversed this land
    many times before
    Each path different
    and yet somehow the same
    Auburn skies
    greet me in the evening
    a quiet moment to find myself
    within your presence
    I look deep into your eyes
    and find my reflection there
    We are one and the same
    an intertwined union
    harmonized singleness
    We find serenity
    in the proximity
    of each other
    There is no need to speak in words
    So much more is said in the silence
    between each breath
    Reach for me
    Dance with me in the river
    this shoreless sea
    pulsating
    vibrating
    flowing effervescent
    Peace in synchronized rhythm
    we sway
    with a gaze on my reflection in the water
    I am remembering from whence I came
    created from the essence of love
    molded with the fingers of might
    I am rich
    I rest my hand upon my noble chest
    and feel the Universe within me
    alive and powerful
    radiant as the noonday sun
    follow closely the gentle water
    that caresses upon my skin
    drops slowly gliding down my profile
    resting on my lips before traveling further
    it is an ancient ritual
    a sanctified moment
    blessing me
    cleansing me
    arms outstretched
    I close my eyes
    and lay back into the water
    resting limply in your hands
    I entrust myself to you
    floating in the eternal abyss
    we are beauty
    unabashed
    unspoken
    glistening brilliant as a billion stars
    transfixed in this singleness
    we shed our bodies
    dance in spirit
    and know each other as one
    as He watches over us
    and smiles










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