My Sin by MascaraTears69

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Author:	MascaraTears69
ASL Info:	14/f/cali
Elite Ratio:	2.39 - 15/11/7
Words:	68

Class/Type:	Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
Total Views:	465
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	420

Description:
A poem about cutting. Comments would be nice...

My Sin

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Driving a razor into my skin.
Love for the blood,this is my sin.

All the anger inside of me.
All the pain you cannot see.

Slice it up,bleed it away.
So I can live another day.

Deeper and deeper, why can't I feel?
I need to know if this is real.

Dead inside, at life I can't win.
Surviving by cutting,this is my sin.

Submitted on 2006-04-10 00:00:57 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  I like that.

Interesting how such things can make you feel alive, isn't it?
I know too well what you mean.

I don't have anything negative to say.

Hang in there. All will brighten up soon enough.
At least, that's what I heard.

Good luck with everything.

great job

-nikkki
| Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
  I cant say i can totally relate but i have been in the situation where i fel like taking my own life to end my pain and depression, dont though, try to tough it out you'll come out being stronger than you ever thought possibly. Really nice piece, short but every ounce powerful.

Kuddos,
Jay.
| Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it. your talking about cutting because of pain, and I know EXACTLY what thats is like but i think everyone, (mostly girls) have that point when they are into masochism. I like it
keep it up.
| Posted on 2006-04-10 00:00:00 | by i wish | [ Reply to This ]
  Now that’s a cool poem, I like it , it’s so much better than the first one .
just in the last stanza it should be in life not at life
nice job describing your feelings
~~Drakoniss~~
| Posted on 2006-04-10 00:00:00 | by drakoniss | [ Reply to This ]

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