I agree with Intricate1 on the parts that you need a little editing on but other than that this poem was extarodinarily good. You showed a lot of emotion and how that persons relationship is with that certain person. great write.
Well, first of all, I like this.. it shows an insightful amount of info (in a poetic way) of how the subject feels about the relationship she is in. Also, great title, which is what drew me to read this. There are a few touch-ups I would make, for example: in the 4th stanza, quotation marks where the "other" person is speaking. and the last stanza.. maybe allow "in peron" to have a line of its own.. for emphasis?
I think you did well with this and it's certainly worth the read.