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    dots Submission Name: For Gooddots
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    Author: celticflame
    ASL Info:    17, Female, Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 4/15/23
    Words: 276
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Friendship
    Total Views: 1595
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1671



    Description:
       These are not my words,; they're from a musical called Wicked. I just put them on here because I like them so much, and because I can totally identify!


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    dotsFor Gooddots
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    I've heard it said
    That people come into our lives
    For a reason,
    Bringing something we must learn,
    And we are led to those
    Who help us most to grow
    If we let them,
    And we help them in return.
    Well, I don't know if I believe that's true,
    But I know I'm who I am today
    Because I knew you.
    Like a comet pulled from orbit
    As it passes a sun,
    Like a stream that meets a boulder
    Halfway through the wood.
    Who can say if I've been changed for the better?
    But because I knew you
    I have been changed for good.
    It well may be
    That we may never meet again
    In this lifetime,
    So let me say before we part
    So much of me is made of what I learned from you
    You'll be with me,
    Like a handprint on my heart.
    And now whatever way our stories end,
    Know you have rewritten mine
    By being my friend.
    Like a ship blown from its mooring
    By a wind off the sea.
    Like a seed dropped by a skybird
    In a distand wood.
    Who can say if I've been changed for the better?
    But, because I knew you
    I have been changed for good.
    And just to clear the air,
    I ask forgiveness
    For the things I've done you blame me for.
    But then I guess we know there's blame to share,
    And none of it seems to matter anymore.
    Who can say if I've been changed for the better?
    I do believe I have been changed for the better.
    And because I knew you,
    I have been changed for good.




    Submitted on 2006-04-10 13:20:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is really beautiful
    I realize you did not write this but that does not make a difference
    You showed us your heart by sharing this
    Thank You
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-04-10 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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