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    dots Submission Name: Blood's After-tastedots
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    Author: diamonds_2_dust
    ASL Info:    15/m/Eugene Oregon
    Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 105/161/35
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Vampire
    Total Views: 241
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       um... i think it explains itself...


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    dotsBlood's After-tastedots
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    I never knew the taste
    and the adrenaline rush
    that you could get
    from simply the taste of blood
    The deep color,
    it's so enticing
    and the way you live
    looks so enticing
    dwelling in the night
    sheltered from the pounding light

    but here i am wanting more
    sprawled out on the floor
    blade in my hand
    and i cant understand
    why it leave or go away
    the bitter taste is here to stay
    i crave for new
    maybe you
    just some blood
    other than my own
    a new taste
    a new tone

    ...it's an addiction
    and a turn of fate
    it's blood's
    bitter after-taste




    Submitted on 2006-04-10 13:38:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is an interesting write
    I take Blood as describing The Love
    Or the High you get when others Love you
    I have this same high on Life sometimes myself and most of the time there is nothing wrong with it
    It is when we become impulsive and Have to have that love to survive that we become ego tistical and others can feel that negativity
    Taking away all our friends and loved ones
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-04-10 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice... I myself like the bittersweet taste of blood, especially when it comes from a certain person, but this poem portrats quite the addiction to it. There wasn't anything wrong with the poem, it was written well, and rocked wickedly awesome.
    Keep it real..

    never_wanted
    | Posted on 2006-04-10 00:00:00 | by never_wanted | [ Reply to This ]



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