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    dots Submission Name: Voiddots
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    Author: WhErEaMi
    ASL Info:    16/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 35/38/24
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsVoiddots
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    Void, canceled, simply annulled.
    Endlessly aching, unconsoled.
    Life without you, cause without reason.
    Touch without sense, time without season.
    I face life now facing a cancerous sore,
    A sordid parasite that eats at my core.
    All that makes me whole, all I hold deep within,
    Leaving me lifeless, or at least not livin'.

    A shallow face, anguished and marred.
    An empty space, scaled and scarred.
    Sweetly abiding to a cynical charade.
    Secretly hiding 'hind a fictitious facade.
    Still, lost within this heart of glass,
    This fragile and yet unfeeling mass.
    Lies the remains of a love that glowed,
    The gift to you I once bestowed.

    But honor and pride now bereaved-
    By your love for me so misconceived,
    Ripped from my inner depths, impeding-
    Mind and body and spirit, bleeding;
    Now's crushed to sand from thy ruthless hand,
    A cold stare I just can't understand.
    I feel that somehow, somehow I'm dying,
    At least my soul and all that's underlying.

    A simple void, is that what I've become?
    The hollowed sphere on a pendulum.
    Swinging back and forth, emotion to emotion,
    Never once stopping, nor slowing the motion.
    No reason, no answer, no justification.
    The creation of a sterile imagination.
    Just passing through time as time passes me.
    Merely a nothing- nothing, merely, left to be.
    Sightless and soundless, unseen and unheard.
    Mindless and boundless, obscure and absurd.
    All empathy lying ungraced, unemployed,
    I live my life dying, unembraced, a void




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