This is fantastic I mean really really fantastic Youve taken the concept of sheeding the negative and filling it with positive and then took that one step further and wrote about the physical effects of that change Very Very Origanel I really like this Graet Job God Bless Ron
Neat! The shedding of snakeskin stayed with me right through this.
Clever wordplay gives it a lovely rhythm and slows it down in the appropriate places.
Finding information about kundalnin is hard, there's not much on the net, so I take it you have it in a book? I know they have gurus, and that's about all. This has given me more insight into their beliefs.