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I am aware


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 211
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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I am aware



I am aware...
I am aware of death
I am aware of life
I am aware of Heartache and Strife
I am aware of trouble
the epidmics that plaque us
I am aware of struggles
that some people struggle to live
i am away of other peopole
those who are less fortunate that me
I am aware of imperfection
I am aware of racial discrimmination
I am aware of sterotypes
I am aware of words that divide me from other people......
I am aware of love
that maybe he doesn't love me
I am aware of the fact that
love can hurt and heal
I am aware that my feelings are real
I am aware that love sees no gender
love sees no race
I am aware that people treat me the way i carry myself
I am aware that nobody's perfect
I am aware that i'm wrong sometimes
I am aware that people will talk
but also not to give a fuck
I am aware that i am who i am
that noone can change me
I am aware of the sacrifices my ancestors lived through
to let me be me......
i am aware of the knowlege
passed form one generation to the next
i am aware of...life




Submitted on 2006-04-11 21:47:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i really like this one, it felt like it was letting someone know ya know I AM AWARE OF ALL THIS STUFF!!! but also growing into a adult idk that just kinda what i got good job
| Posted on 2006-04-11 00:00:00 | by kLaDeeDa | [ Reply to This ]
  seemed a bit too simple. i did like the last line because it summed up the entire poem very nicely but i still think this one is lacking
| Posted on 2006-04-19 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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