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Death


Author: Kelly17
ASL Info:    25/f/NY
Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 17 /8 /10
Words: 57
Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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This is about the death of a friendship


Death



Pina colada with
A splash of lime;
The taste lingers on my tongue.

He showed me the outside,
The freedom.

He corrupted me with fantasies.

We blew bubbles
And watched them
Float away,
With our memories.

You said
Simple words about nothing
Which meant everything to me.

God,
I hate goodbyes.




Submitted on 2006-04-11 23:20:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Yes! this was a wonderful poem in these little lines you expressed so much. You showed his impact on you and how your going to miss him so....vented on the memories this was a reallg good short poem.
-Christina aka POETRY
| Posted on 2006-04-12 00:00:00 | by POETRY | [ Reply to This ]
  wow small but wonderful.expression complete as i like to say. but words ......... many blanks.

Pina colada with
A splash of lime;

this could have been wriitten better.
| Posted on 2006-04-12 00:00:00 | by keestu | [ Reply to This ]


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