I think I was also attracted by the title, thought it would be a comedy maybe... I've just decided I really like youir poetry because it's very aprt from mundane ramblings, but not so divorced from the mundane to not make sense. And it does make sense, quite a lot actually. Been reading Genesis lately?
well, i came for the title and stayed for the awesome wording.
"Order and chaos are one and the same. Are you confused or do you understand? Understanding follows confusion." i like this part. I think it was nifty the way it contradicted itself but than made sense. (did that make sense? )
i hope you don't mind, but i'm going to interpret, well, i'll tell you what it makes me think of. Fore warning, i'm REALLY bad at interpreting stuff.
i kinda got the idea that someone was making these little soldiers to go off and take over the world... maybe i took the words to literally, but thats what it made me think of. Or God, it could be a God thing. I'm not real good with those.
well, i tried my hand at interpreting... i think i failed... i'll try to improve on that.