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    dots Submission Name: The Wish Masterdots
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    Author: intoxicated411
    ASL Info:    14/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 45/60/28
    Words: 413
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 125
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 2546



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       I like it.
    I find myself reading it over and over again.
    I think its the best one ive written.
    I hope you like it.
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    dotsThe Wish Masterdots
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    The Wish Master:
    You get 7 wishes.
    But you have some rules.
    No death or corruption
    To be brought on the fools.
    And no Love to be brought unto
    People or you.
    And last but not least.
    You have to complete them all.
    Or you will fall.
    And your heart will go black.
    And every single wish I will take back.


    You:
    I want to feel like I have a way out.
    I want to feel clouds and not the ground.
    Excuse me if I’m not being real
    But I want to feel.
    Something other than the pain
    Of not being able
    To fly away
    To soar away.
    I wish I had wings.

    I want a way of being able to be seen
    To have a face
    That doesn’t make people see
    The fake me.
    I only show my real one.
    In my poetry.
    I wish I were pretty.

    To have a voice
    Has been my dream.
    To let the world hear.
    The sound of my heart beat.
    To have talent and poise.
    And not just make loud noise.
    I wish I could sing.

    I’ve always wanted
    A hand that’s connected to my heart.
    That could draw anything.
    Not just simple designs
    But know true art.
    To put the images in my mind on paper
    I wish I could draw.

    My life seems like it’s out of control.
    Pulling me down into a great big hole.
    Its not so bad
    Until the feelings catch you by surprise
    And the only thing to do
    Is close your eyes
    I wish I had the perfect life.

    I want a way with words.
    To let them come out understood
    Not in shambles
    And in stupid rhymes
    But in perfect meaning.
    That puts tears in your eyes.
    I wish I were clever.

    And last but not Wish Master
    Even though its against the rules.

    I want the one
    Who will have had me from hello.
    Who will never let go.
    The one of my dreams.
    Who will make my heart fly.
    And make me feel beautiful.
    Who makes my voice sound the best.
    So when they hear me
    The crowd will cry.
    And makes me draw my heart
    On document
    With a pen.
    Someone who will make my life
    Seem perfect
    If they can.
    Just by being with me.
    Who brings out
    The clever words I’m looking for
    In the way
    That makes you ask for more.




    Submitted on 2006-04-12 12:56:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      *smiles* Really loved this piece right here. The idea was great, the beginning was intrigiuging and the end was beautiful. I hope you find that true love which you search. Sometimes it comes, sometimes one just doesn't get no luck, but only for this beautiful poem I would give you a good chance. A poem is like a mirror to the soul.
    | Posted on 2006-04-14 00:00:00 | by Erik | [ Reply to This ]



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