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    dots Submission Name: The Power of Sounddots
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    Author: Kelly17
    ASL Info:    25/f/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 17/8/10
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 125
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsThe Power of Sounddots
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    What is it that makes me forgive you?
    That makes me long for your company and your arms around me
    What triggers the safety I feel when your near
    And erases the loneliness when your not
    It leads me to an unimaginable high
    That dwindles to depression as soon as it’s gone
    Keeping on an emotional roller coaster
    Complete with the loops and turns
    One minute I hate you, the next I would die for you
    It controls me
    Forcing me to feel emotions I’ve never felt before
    The thought of losing those feelings scare me
    Making me yearn for more
    You hold all the power in your words
    Your voice…




    Submitted on 2006-04-12 13:37:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow .....i love this....i can relate to this so well....haha...in an unfortunate but fortunate way...i like how you put it all together and on a personal note no matter what the person you are deeply in love with has done just there voice touches your heart and you just melt back in love ...
    I liked this a lot..........
    God Bless
    Take Care
    Lotsaluv
    Nadine
    | Posted on 2006-04-12 00:00:00 | by lostspirit | [ Reply to This ]
      i thought by the title this would be a different poem or story maybe about life and its wonders
    a love poem thats good just never looked at a person that way or should i say i would never let someone control me that way

    great write and good read
    sandman
    | Posted on 2006-04-12 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      urrg. i just commented on this but my computer messed up. guess i'll just re-do it. i think this was sweet. the title kinda through me off cause it made me think it was gonna be about life in a general sense. u talk about ur own experiences with love but left it kinda general so that everyone can relate. i don't think it's just his voice that has u feeling this way. lol
    | Posted on 2006-06-03 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]



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