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The Power of Sound


Author: Kelly17
ASL Info:    25/f/NY
Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 17 /8 /10
Words: 113
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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The Power of Sound



What is it that makes me forgive you?
That makes me long for your company and your arms around me
What triggers the safety I feel when your near
And erases the loneliness when your not
It leads me to an unimaginable high
That dwindles to depression as soon as it’s gone
Keeping on an emotional roller coaster
Complete with the loops and turns
One minute I hate you, the next I would die for you
It controls me
Forcing me to feel emotions I’ve never felt before
The thought of losing those feelings scare me
Making me yearn for more
You hold all the power in your words
Your voice…




Submitted on 2006-04-12 13:37:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow .....i love this....i can relate to this so well....haha...in an unfortunate but fortunate way...i like how you put it all together and on a personal note no matter what the person you are deeply in love with has done just there voice touches your heart and you just melt back in love ...
I liked this a lot..........
God Bless
Take Care
Lotsaluv
Nadine
| Posted on 2006-04-12 00:00:00 | by lostspirit | [ Reply to This ]
  i thought by the title this would be a different poem or story maybe about life and its wonders
a love poem thats good just never looked at a person that way or should i say i would never let someone control me that way

great write and good read
sandman
| Posted on 2006-04-12 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
  urrg. i just commented on this but my computer messed up. guess i'll just re-do it. i think this was sweet. the title kinda through me off cause it made me think it was gonna be about life in a general sense. u talk about ur own experiences with love but left it kinda general so that everyone can relate. i don't think it's just his voice that has u feeling this way. lol
| Posted on 2006-06-03 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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