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    dots Submission Name: Love and trafficdots
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Love and traffic

    This is not about a woman
    You might think that way
    In terms of male and female
    Of love and traffic

    But I don’t

    You might think that there is more something here
    Something in the spacing of words
    Something you can touch
    With your finger tips and understand

    But this is not art through womanhood
    This is not masturbation with textbooks
    Paper does not speak for me

    Dialogue separates action from narration
    Giving a voice to what is not there

    Stop lights burn all across town
    And bring men to their knees
    I can now watch the back play of emotion
    Trickle down between your shoulder blades
    And end up somewhere on the floor

    There is something there now
    A stain on the carpet
    In the shape of you body

    But only parts of your body
    Other part where lost in the back seat
    When the red light hit

    There is an insight to be sought under beds and in closets
    Something unknown about sour smiles in the dark
    And arms wrapped around cold shoulders

    A wet feeling colliding with your day-to-day life

    But this is not about a woman
    This not anything I know
    This is about you
    And the chemical reaction we started




    Submitted on 2006-04-12 16:22:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Paper does not speak for me

    I liked that line. I am not too sure ed-zachary what the write is about, but it gives a hint to those subtle "looks" people give one another in traffic. Those, "I wonder if he/she would 'do me'" looks, ya know? But most people in traffic are always going some where and never have time to get an answer to that question, HA!

    | Posted on 2006-04-12 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]



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