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    dots Submission Name: Pablo (spanish)dots
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    Author: YoungWerther
    ASL Info:    20/M/ Los Locos
    Elite Ratio:    4.14 - 69/92/65
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 110
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 486



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       For my argentine lover


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    dotsPablo (spanish)dots
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    Como dicen aquellos imbéciles
    Que el amor mio es tal cosa-,
    Mundana e inútil, es unico de mil perfiles
    La fragancia del misterio; el olor de una rosa
    El amor rompe aquella cuerda de mi pesar
    La abundancia de la calamidad
    Mis ojos giran hacia la magia de vos
    El universo encubierto en tu eternidad
    El mundo arrastra en pos-,
    De estar a cierta distancia; tal es mi soledad
    Soy tal poeta un pobre enamorado!




    Submitted on 2006-04-12 19:11:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That sounded really lofty in Spanish but I am thinking would sound almost as powerful in English.

    What for the poor love-struck poet.....

    But I also see that the feel of the poem may differ slightly. Some things lose their elegance and glory in translation.

    | Posted on 2006-04-15 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]



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