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    dots Submission Name: Friends are the Bacon Bitsdots
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    Author: MyFairCalamity
    ASL Info:    17**I'm a lady**philly
    Elite Ratio:    7.1 - 115/67/16
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 728
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 940



    Description:
       so many inside jokes, so few things that rhyme.

    "Friends are the Bacon Bits in the salad bowl of life"


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    Iíd be lost without my awesome friends,
    To them, no one else even contends.

    Oh boy are they super, and we have real fun times,
    Iíll tell you just how great with a few bad rhymes.

    Every party would be a fartner,
    If it lacked my swell dance partner.

    If I didnít have my fearless idiot,
    Who would help me get out of doing shit?

    Oh, and whatever on Earth would I do,
    If I didnít have wise old Guru?

    If Fort Torf was minus itís mayor,
    It would surely be attacked by a big bear.

    None of us will ever be the party pooper,
    We always dance ourselves into a stupor.

    My darling, my dearest, my beautiful buddies,
    I am so glad that you are both nutties.

    Now Iíll end all the madness with one last thing to say,
    Iím sorry this is so lame, please have a nice day.




    Submitted on 2006-04-12 23:52:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Since Mianus is the place to be,
    we should go there and party.


    lol I don't know, dude. I got 7 minutes to get my comments up and I don't know what to say about this.
    It made me laugh

    You're such a freak... but I guess that means I am too, since I was part of your inspiration.



    "Oh, and whatever on Earth would I do,
    If I didnít have wise old Guru?"

    Hehe I love it. I don't know what you'd do... but you're not gonna find out any time soon.
    I will stalk you forever!!!!!!!


    Love,
    Guru
    | Posted on 2006-10-11 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      hi kate,

    ahhhh. im sick and im in school. : ( i hear your sick too: (
    i feel crappy and wasnt really up to commenting but its been long enough..

    i liked this. it made me laugh. i think no one else commented because they probalbly wont ever get it since most of this is all inside jokes. ha ha ha. they are all on the outside.

    the only thing i didnt like was the words that i didnt know the meanings of.
    contends., fartner, stupor.
    im not that bright. its not your fault im dumb.

    anyway. this poem was a hoot!

    i hope you feel better!!!!!

    Sick=Bad

    love Samm
    | Posted on 2006-05-02 00:00:00 | by LoveToHateMe | [ Reply to This ]
      lol Hah. Kate, that was (by far) one of the strangest things I've ever read. But I nearly laughed myself into a coma.

    I'm just surprised it said nothing about Mianus. Oh well.

    Ooo Fort Torf... good times

    I must admit, some of the rhyming wasnt the best (as you already know), lol but I was impressed by a few of them. Like "pooper" and "stupor." lol I liked that. Very clever.

    You're such a treasure

    Very fabulously done, pal

    Love always
    ...Guru.
    | Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      Great titling...

    -Anya
    | Posted on 2006-06-25 00:00:00 | by FarawayFeelings | [ Reply to This ]


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