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Author:	KrimsonReaper
ASL Info:	26/M/Denver, CO
Elite Ratio:	4.61 - 328/443/46
Words:	101

Class/Type:	Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
Total Views:	644
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	842

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Ahh, the spark. I've been wanting to get this one out for a while. It has been hovering in my mind--somewhere just behind my right ear, about halfway up--for a long time. I wanted to write it, but the timing wasn't right. I was waiting for the spark, that one line that sets it all in motion. I found that spark a couple of days ago, and then I let it hover as well. I waited. And tonight the spark ignited within me this burning--I hope the screen explodes. This is for one of my close ones, she knows who she is. Loev you, honey. Wanted to paint the pain.

Cutter

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Dance with blades, my pretty Child,
Love you like no other has,
Singing dreamlight from your burning—
     I know you’ve cut the pain again.

Mourn your malice, help you hate
Your hate of heaven, Spring reflection.
April nights in starry empty—
     "Smile, Darlin’, it wets the cheek."

I’ll kiss the scars, come bleed away.
Binge on heartbeats, don’t purge the lie;
Don’t understand, they never will—
     my voice a memory to melt the wound.

Dying, Dearest…more ailing moonbirds,
Echo hymns from twilight choir;
A Southern breeze will cleanse the wings—
     don’t have to hurt like that today.

Submitted on 2004-05-07 01:00:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  well um thanx for your sweet word and i read your poem...it made me think...alot...which gave me a headache because thinking means work but i do appreciate your efforts-you sound like a really great person and i hope that the person you wrote this for knows what shes got. thanx again.
| Posted on 2004-11-10 00:00:00 | by sweet-fire | [ Reply to This ]
  wow. The 1st and 3rd were my faves. I think. You're so supportive of this girl and this gives me a whole new perspective. The idea of physically abusing oneself has always confused me... it's so easy to mentally abuse yourself (as most of us know too well), but I know that I would never have anything inside me strong enough (love, hate, pain, bravery, what you will) to actually hurt myself. You're right-- I probably will never understand. But this definitely sheds some light and makes it clearer and makes me feel sympathetic towards your girl. Keep being the support she needs.
| Posted on 2004-07-01 00:00:00 | by mixedemotions00 | [ Reply to This ]
  Merry meet again Aaron. The first 2 lines I can relate to soooooo well. While I have been trying not to the last few years I have been cutting on myself for 15 years. And there were definetly times where I felt that the blade was my only friend. Bravo on capturing thoughts so well. Blessed Be Andie
| Posted on 2004-06-27 00:00:00 | by magickandie | [ Reply to This ]
  this is a hauntingly beautiful piece of work. your first two lines explain in a very unique way the fascination that may come with cutting. i don't know because i don't understand it. your last two lines are exquisite. what a spark that was, krimson!
| Posted on 2004-05-14 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]

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