Hi, This is a nice write. Shows how a friendship can lead to something else. The only thing I have to say on the negative is the stanza grouping and some punctuations. I'm not good in the punctuation department. I need a refresher course. Hopefully someone will be nice enough to help you. Other than that, it was a good piece expressing how you feel. Very passionate. take care, wanda
Hey there, This is a nice piece here...I mean a smile just escaped my lips when I finished with the piece...Laudable job here...It certainly is going to my favourites..I know the feelings..Its as if you're walking on egg shells...And if it aint reciprocated the way you wanna..It becomes a huge ugly mess altogether....But I'm glad for you the turn of events were wonderful...Keep writing...This one's going to my favourites.U know why? Today being "Good Friday" I'm workin...Sad I know...So just when I was feeling sorry 4 myself..Your piece here just lifted me up...Thanks.... :D
Hey this was a wonderful write. this was a happy way of how best friend/ boyfriend relationships usually work out. I mean I fell in love with my best friend who was a guy and I mena we were exactly what you too were ecxept he didnt love me like that. Being in that situation really does suck. Becasue I let my love get in the way we are no longer even friends. Sad huh? Well I am gld things worked out for you and him.
"Then Easter you handed me a card with seven words. "I love you too, the same way."
This wzas my favorite part because it was like one of those fairy tale endings at least to me it was. Great write. -Christina aka POETRY