Description: about the same person in "faith works miracles" and i feel so depressed right now
Tears of regret -------------------------------------------
Why am I here?
Is there any reason to live for?
Living in this world like a shadow
Nobody knows who I really am
I never felt this empty before
Acting happy in front of others
Envying me for my happiness
That is a cover of my sadness
You're the only one who could see what is behind this smile
A girl who is afraid to show her feelings
Afraid they are going to reject her
Struggling in her emotions
Living unstable life
Shedding tears of regret in the lonely nights
Waiting for you..
To stop her suffering from losing you
I'm sick and tired of this life
Losing you is something I can't handle
Wishing to sleep and never wake up
Feeling the whole world againts me
I don't have a reason to live for
If I don't belong here..
If the earth is not for me...
Is heaven going to be..?
i feel the exact same way, im more into rhyming poetry but that was really good too... i might even use this idea for myself... i'll show you first though if i do make one with this subject... cya!!!
A very good write and I am sure struck a chord with a few people. Fitting in can be difficult. So can being accepted. All I will say is - be yourself and live your life by what you believe in and stand for.
Very thoughtful. I know where you're coming from. There are times when I wonder if I can't fit in my town, will I ever fit in? But I guess we have to have faith that there is something out there for us. I'm not saying that I'm going to do something amazing, or that you're not, I'm just saying that sometimes it's better to push on for the unknown, then to quit so close to finding what you want.
Now for the poem:
It was good, but your grammar was off. I'll say poetic lisence though. Some of the punctuation marks were confusing, but they got the point across. It made me think, which is good. So, overall good poem!
ok this good... i really like ur poems they are really good. you seem to have a lot of talent and i'm hopin to see more of ur work.... the poem was good... i know exactly how it feels to pretend ur happy.. its tough livin in this world but sometimes we just dont have the answers so we just have to gone on hoping things will get better....
i like this poem and ive been in your shoes always faking that im happy and fine but being sonsumed by my pain inside you are a really good writer and hope to read more of your stuff ~Peace~
Submission Name: Tears of regret
