Description: The never ending quest to write something DIFFERENT. I meant this piece to pay off best if you read the whole thing.
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Wanted-
Subhuman-
To share in the feelings
Of wearing a mask
And mimic the reelings
And share in the task
Of picking up pieces of broken dreams
Of fighting on despite
How it sometimes seems.
Desired-
Pervert-
Another who delves
In sharing the bout
Of massacring ourselves
From the inside out
For fun and distraction
For meaningless hours
Of satisfaction.
Seeking-
Liar-
To tell me a fable
That its ok
That things are stable
And that she'll stay
Beside me when
I'm off my feet
And on again.
Beseaching-
Preacher-
All denominations
Who listens to raving
And gives out salvation
Like she gives out saving
Who forgives transgression
And leaves you smiling
After every confession.
Nah... Thats all melodromatic bullshit...
Needed-
A woman
Not too demanding
And not too complex
Must be understanding
Must like oral sex-
Thats giving and getting
I laughed my ass off ....i like this poem alot i was thinking it was very well organized and put together and it just rolled off of your tongue and i read the last stanza and it ended perfectly...very nice AL
Not all people live like that. This was a kinda insult to me the way i think women as godly and you change the whole prospective. If this was written by me i would have taken this into a negative prospective of the not so good society.
added to my favs i thought it was awesome. humurous but it also makes you think. i just want to say to keestu that your comment doesn't make any sense.
"I think of women as godly and you changed the whole prospective"
I am guessing that you meant the word perspective and the definition of it is A way of regarding situations or topics one way as in more than one. so were you saying that it changed your perspective or what?
Well it's nice that you added in the giving and getting part of things! haha this was hilarious. Yes, people look for absolute perfection when they write personal ads, and whats even funnier is the people that answer them and think they are exactly as the ad asked. I personally like the: 50 year old male seeking 20-30 year old female ads. Clearly people look for too much. The last stanza, I don't think is asking for too much... or atleast I hope its not... otherwise, what I'm asking for in a guy is clearly next to impossible. This was amusing, long time no see by the by! -Andrya
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