Description: Well the start is a litte harsh but just keep reading
My Revenge -------------------------------------------
Light the maches
Burn the people
Let them burn
Let them suffer
Not for me
But for the ones you've hurt
The hearts you've broken
The minds you've hypnotized
The scars you left
The junk you've spread
Just spread it all
I don't care
Cause one day ill laugh at it all
Right in your crying faces
But then my fun will end
Cause my heart is not as hard as yours
I feel sorry
I help you up
My revenge is over
I don't like most poems about negative emotion, but this one was great. It qualifies in my book as an excellent poem. It reads well, the structure, the organization, word choice and content is powerful, and it has its own music--however creepy/angry music it is. I love how it starts and I love how it ends. This one is awesome.
It's one of those that I could sit and read over and over again until I fall asleep I should seriosuly copy all your poems down somewhere. And read them over and over, until I fall asleep
Sometimes I feel like this too. It's nice to find an outlet, right? However, the poems I write in this kind of mood should be buried six feet under and never seen again.
I like how this poem all seems to come rushing out, an outpour of rage and righteous vengeance, and then at the end you collect yourself and help them up. This is an excellent rant-write, if not more than that.
well, i can't really say much i enjoyed reading it and i deffently love the begining...the fire oh the fire. unfortanally iam kinda a heartless [censored] and [censored] if they desearve they deserve i'll even kick while there down but anyway i liked it good write -jess-
wow, that was a random thought, can't really call it a poem. so yeah, that was a lot like a song a wrote, it's not on here, but it was really like this. The chorus was like this, "I hate you I wanna hurt you I wanna make you cry. I wanna see blood drip down I wanna see you die."
So yeah, you could see i was pissed off. the only difference is the person i was mad at, i didn't say i was going to help him up. so, yeah, im done here.
Ill bring my chainsawwWWWw and then we can chill... this was awsomely full of hatred in the beginning but that is sooooooooooo you to feel sorry for someone after everything thats good yo i got that problem tooo
I think about revenge all the time for all those that peaople have hurt and it sticks in the back of my mind because I don't have the heart to be as cruel as they were. (All those that discriminate . . . . this is for you.) Never lose hope. They will all get what they deserve. Sometimes I even feel sorry for them for not knowing their own fate. I can't even stand the thought of anybody being hurt... no matter how much of a champion they were..... later z