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    dots Submission Name: A note on Lifedots
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    Author: BlueHeart
    ASL Info:    14/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 14/24/19
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Misc/What is
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       This is what i describe life as


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    dotsA note on Lifedots
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    What is life? Life is a material, an object. It can be shaped, moulded, and changed in so many different ways. But life is never complete. Life is only fully sculpted when death begins. This is the moment in time when body and soul seperate. When this happens the sculpture of life returns to its natural state. What happens at this moment? Does the soul travel to another vessel? Or maybe death is a new life, a better one. A new life in which you can visit past friends and relatives that have passed into this journey. The journey of life The journey of death. The ongoing cycle of the soul. This can lead to many paths on the one path called life. The one you choose will always be the right one. However, there is one excpetion. The greater your path is, the worse it is also.




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      this is awesome. it really shows a view on how life can work. the never ending cycle in life...it's a mystery,and you really portrayed it correctly here..good job.
    | Posted on 2006-07-28 00:00:00 | by lover_gurl | [ Reply to This ]
      "Life is only fully sculpted when death begins."

    I love that line. I mean, I like the whole thing, but that's my favorite.
    The way you describe life is marvelous.
    In my opinion, life is one of those things that are hard to describe because there are so many different ways of looking at it.
    Very nicely done

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2006-04-15 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good
    this write definately left me thinking
    I too believe that Eternal Life begins at Death and we are judged for our Earthly deeds
    Very Well written
    Great Job with this thought provoking piece
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-04-19 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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