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    dots Submission Name: The Game Today is....dots
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    Author: slntfirflm
    ASL Info:    26/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    5.76 - 301/331/93
    Words: 192
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
    Total Views: 943
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1220



    Description:
       I can't really give the reason for this. It's just a game I unfortunately know. Just give a suggestion on what the type it should be. another confusing one to decide.


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    dotsThe Game Today is....dots
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    Can we play another game?
    Can we watch each other scream?
    We both enjoy that.
    Can you show me how to win?
    Can I show you how to lose?

    Let's try patty cake
    or maybe a nursery rhyme.
    I know its not our favorite,
    but we'll save the best
    for another time.

    Can I show you how to lose?
    I win at that everytime.
    Because that's all I know to do.

    Can you show me how to win?
    You are horrible at losing.
    Because that's all you know to do.

    Maybe another game is for the best.
    Only this once though.
    I don't know many
    Yet, I can certainly learn.

    Down talk me for the loss
    I can handle it.
    For its what I'm use to.

    Glorify you for your winnings
    its the way its supposed to go.
    For it's what your use to.

    Can we play another game?
    Can we watch each other scream?
    We both enjoy that.
    Can you show me how to win?
    Can I show you how to lose?

    I just don't mind anymore.
    For it's an everyday thing.




    Submitted on 2006-04-14 15:03:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is Fantastic
    I understand and can relate easily to this write
    I believe you are speaking of the battle a child has with his parents Its actually a battle of wits
    Who can be smarter then the other
    Sadly
    Ivve been thru this same gane and even more sadly I am still playing this pathetic game even at the age of 37 for I am living with my father trying to help him end a depression
    Graet Job On this One
    I really enjoyed reading it
    Take Care of Yourself
    Ron

    Please keep in touch!!!!
    | Posted on 2006-04-14 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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