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Our Soul


Author: iluvpoetry_1
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this is a poem my friend Suheil wrote in english class!
~akaila~


Our Soul



Together we are forever, we will remain, true love. That is what we are.

As beautiful as the sunsent, as lovely as a flower. That is what we are.

Like a snowflake during a warm winter. That is what we are.... you, me, and our soul.

By:Suheil Estrada




Submitted on 2006-04-14 16:30:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  short and sweet. ahhh the power of friendship. i love the way she compared what u had to some of the beauties of nature. tell ur friend she should join the site.
| Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice poem me likey! Like silent said it could of been longer! More expressive would of loved what else love means 2 u! Peace & stay safe...
| Posted on 2006-04-19 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
  This was kinda short, what was here was good but it would have been awesome with more added, like it had alot of potential to be a really emo intense write. but writing in skool can be blah so considering that nice write.
| Posted on 2006-04-14 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]


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