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    dots Submission Name: Our Souldots
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    Author: iluvpoetry_1
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 806/439/119
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       this is a poem my friend Suheil wrote in english class!
    ~akaila~


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    dotsOur Souldots
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    Together we are forever, we will remain, true love. That is what we are.

    As beautiful as the sunsent, as lovely as a flower. That is what we are.

    Like a snowflake during a warm winter. That is what we are.... you, me, and our soul.

    By:Suheil Estrada




    Submitted on 2006-04-14 16:30:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      short and sweet. ahhh the power of friendship. i love the way she compared what u had to some of the beauties of nature. tell ur friend she should join the site.
    | Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice poem me likey! Like silent said it could of been longer! More expressive would of loved what else love means 2 u! Peace & stay safe...
    | Posted on 2006-04-19 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
      This was kinda short, what was here was good but it would have been awesome with more added, like it had alot of potential to be a really emo intense write. but writing in skool can be blah so considering that nice write.
    | Posted on 2006-04-14 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]


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