Suheil: You say that we dont belong.
You say that we are now long done
Akaila: You say that we can never be, never again be able to feel the blazing passion that there used to be.
Suheil: You say that I dont belong in your soul. You say that I am like a snowflake fallin in the desert. Me, the snowflake you the desert.
Akaila: Why can't you just trust me and kiss my lips one more time. I love you and I need you in my life!
| yeah this wasn't really good at all. is this person a guy cuz we all know u swing both ways. lol. this person really likes the snowflake imagery don't they||| Posted on 2006-05-10 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ] || Hmmm, something like we did! Can relate to silent_death though no emotions, poem felt flat! Hope your not mad of my honesty, peace & stay safe...||| Posted on 2006-07-17 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ] || This wasn't all that poetic:P there was imagry and stuff but the wording was kinda just blahish. The emtion was there but for some reason this almost ammused me, I dunno I just feel kinda stoned, I'm lmao at everything tonite. good write...now go be happy or somethin' .|
|| Posted on 2006-04-14 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ] || I liked the xexy you put to play - it is the thing of beings - thata makes a girl pause and give in -nice-||| Posted on 2006-07-25 00:00:00 | by ms.v | [ Reply to This ] |