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    dots Submission Name: Magpiedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 687
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 139



    Description:
       Students

    of a

    book

    no pages...LOVE<PEACE<JOY!!! & Happy Friday!!!


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    dotsMagpiedots
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    Magpie perched upon reachin
    Mother Tree
    of Nature
    Sweet song wind of teaching
    Father Thee
    of
    All




    Submitted on 2004-05-07 09:18:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cute, and innovative. your mind seems less than continguant with the avergage avid writer. so if your looking to blend in with all the other writers, i'm sorry but you don't, not to me anyways. love, peace, joy, and all that other good stuff, yeah, bye now.
    | Posted on 2006-04-09 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      ok.. i'm a ditz... what exactly am i missing out on?... i read it inside out, forwards and backwards... i don't see what JimweiZERO saw




    - fifi
    | Posted on 2004-07-30 00:00:00 | by halopop | [ Reply to This ]
      This is good, again it makes you think and I'm not sure everyone will get the message, a little more description would help. The writing needs nothing added to it though.
    | Posted on 2004-05-07 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]


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