This poem contains a sad truth.... I fear that it is all to real a reality. I think that you capture a real truth here.... How many of us really have good friends? True friends?
I think that your poem will touch people. My only suggestion here is to look out for any spelling or capitalization errors... I think I caught a couple, but then again, you could have done it on purpose.
This poem will appeal to just about anyone who loves their dreams more than reality and / or feels any of the pain that you describe.
This doesn't have as much imagery, but it isn't as important in this poem.
"Friend in a Dream" has the ring of truth and feeling that makes it a great poem!
This was a sad poem, but very true, well at least in my opinion. I have had alot of friends break my heart and thats why I think my only true friend comes in my dreams because it keeps me away from reality. Great poem. I hope you can get by.....take care. -Christina aka POETRY
Submission Name: Friend in Dream
