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    dots Submission Name: VOICES IIdots
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    Author: ROSHAY9992000
    ASL Info:    22/m/fl
    Elite Ratio:    3.18 - 16/12/12
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 731
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 868



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    dotsVOICES IIdots
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    My life is distraught
    Broken hopes and shattered dreams
    Demons inside, posses my well-being
    Dismantaling my life, piece by piece
    The voices so loud, can't block them out
    Starting to break me down
    Until they satisfy my demise
    Please tell me I'm not crazy
    And also I'm not insane
    I grab a knife, flesh now cut
    Blood flows freely, into a puddle of muck
    Vision starts to disappear
    Tunnel-vision begins, the voices are now slight
    Agonizing pain from within my soul
    The fire is burning wanting to get out
    As i watch my body go limp and cold
    My lifeless body lay still
    So alone in life as you die
    No expressions to share
    As I take my last breath
    I am happy, for no more voices
    For me to hear




    Submitted on 2006-04-15 08:40:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i have to admit that im not into all this slitting wrist stuff, i prefere your lighter happy work
    x x x x
    | Posted on 2006-04-15 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]


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