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    dots Submission Name: My Goddessdots
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    Author: ROSHAY9992000
    ASL Info:    22/m/fl
    Elite Ratio:    3.18 - 16/12/12
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMy Goddessdots
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    Who brings upon tears of joy
    No matter what my worries
    One glance, one touch, one spoken word
    From within that woman I love so
    Brings me to my euphoria
    And reminds me why I love you so
    For you are my perfect sunset
    That I never want to end
    You might want to doubt
    All the things I say and do
    But don't negate yourself
    For you have brought me
    Uncontested happiness from within
    Times may be shaky and hard
    And things not quite the same
    there is one thing frozen in time
    And shall forever be the same
    That every waking moment
    Of every single day
    you are and forever
    will always be my love of life.




    Submitted on 2006-04-15 08:43:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      aww this was a sweet tribute, your partner must be a very lucky person to be cared for so much,
    nice tribute
    x x x x
    | Posted on 2006-04-15 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]


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