Chrys, I like these, and I might print them out, and put them on my wall, for a touch of inspiration. Very unique on your part, and like magnicat, I love the bees. Makes me laugh. Great job! Keep living the dream! ~Azura*
Chrystine This write is very vivid This really carries a lot of imagery I like the line about the hairy legs of a bee That line is extremely creative You always open up my mind to new ideas with your writes Thank You for that God Bless Ron
nice little love one-liners Chrystine. makes me want to think of some of my own. i liked the reference to the 90-proof distilled spirit. i once wrote something about falling into "your 100-proof tantaleyes.."
your last one, i thought you'd made a typo as i read "popping of life's cork" but using "corn" is great and not cliché like the cork..
i was tickled by the hair legs of the bee, how unique!!