I'm In Danger -------------------------------------------
verse 1~
have you ever felt so alone
surrounded by familiar faces
but yet no ones home
nothing can ease the hurt inside
hiding behind nothing but lies
that everyone can see right through
chorus~
they all see the danger i'm in
but no one will come to my rescue
they see the tears in my eyes
as i'm holding on for my dear life
with no one standing by my side
i'm going outta my mind
verse 2~
have you ever had to turn away
from everything that you know
everything that's familiar
life is against you, no where to hide
and you're left standing naked
in front of ones you called your friends
chorus~
verse 3~
have you ever screamed so loud
so everyone hears your hurt
but no one stops to listen
how could you be so cruel to me
i gave you my beatin' heart
i gave you my everything
chorus x2~
coda~
have you ever given up hope
to find the comfort
to help ease all the pain
you know i'm going insane
i'm going outta my mind
i've living life on the edge
i'm in danger
Wow, verry emotional. I can relate to this peice and I hope things change. I've seen you do better on flow and things though of course I'm sure it would sound great with music but I think the messege in this speaks louder than it would in perfect rythem. Good write.