I liked the rhyming and flow a lot. It's got the emotions as I read it. I felt the pain which reminded me of mine. Descriptions were nice. The ending has an impact. Although I'm not into cutting, stuff like that, I really liked it and I'm adding it. Hehe. Take care.
I truly did love this poem...I can relate to it a lot..its sad though...everyone deserves to live..happy...but were not..And i guess that sux...and cutting is pretty the worst addiction..The ending of this poem hit me hard..It sorta made me think, why am I alive..?..whats the point of livng....And is there another way to live?..'cuz its the only way to die...so maybe people live to die..and suicide is just a quick route to happiness...i don't know..any who this piece had a lot of meaning and the flow was great!..Its something i think a lot of people can relate to ...and hopefully stop cutting..although its hard as hell to stop...anyhow good luck with your future rights..you've got a hell of a talent my dear!..laters! (hope you stop cutting soon..much love ^_^)