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    dots Submission Name: The Strangest Emotiondots
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    Author: BlueHeart
    ASL Info:    14/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 14/24/19
    Words: 1150
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 614
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    Bytes: 6553



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       Love </3

    I poured my heart into this one day, and then just posted it on my blog. I might as well post it on here.


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    Love, such a wonderous emotion. When you meet or see a person that you immediately love they call it love at first sight. You now you're in the "crush" stage of this emotion. You shyly make your way to this person and flirt like they're the last person on earth. You eventually get to the "lets get together sometime" stage of the crush. This is where you find that your crush actually likes you and wants to get to know you. You walk home like you've been lifted off your feet, like you're walking on air and your enthusiasm is at it's best.
    Over the next couple of days, hours, minutes, you find yourself smiling and laughing at nothing. You feel as if you could win the olympics and speed past every person who's ever sped past you. Your friends find you more fun to hang out with you due to the new mood, and you improve your relationships all round. You do even better than possible at work/school and your life is quickly and gradually improving. Then it's time.
    You pick out your best ourfit and prepare for your first romantic evening with your star-cros'd lover. You go out have fun and learn you have much in common. You feel like you've known the person for ages and if you're seperated you'll just die. You're romantic evening levels out to you and your lover walking home together, talking more under the light of the full moon. You finally stop after you laugh some on a wonderful joke your lover had presented. You stare into eachothers eyes as if they're basins of eternal light just waiting to be presented. Then it happens your love leans in and closes ther eyes. You follow and soon you're lip locked into a romantic knee-popping kiss.
    You and your lovers relationship quickly improves as you go on your second date. They say you're a match made in heaven, you say you're a match made on earth, and thats when it starts. You start to finish eachothers sentences and you know in your heart that you're meant to me together, forever. Two souls eternally bound together by the threads of fate. You start reciting romantic poetry with them and they listen intentfully, and the whole time the only thing they're staring at are your eyes. Those basins of light you just can't help but stare at. And even before you're finished your love has locked-lips with you once again. They just can't keep their hands off you and you could never take yours off them. You proceed to spend as much time as you can with them, and soon the star-cros'd lovers are so paralled with eachothers destiny that it seems like you would die without them. And they think the same of you. You're threads of fate are now so intwined that it seems they could never be un-knotted.
    You and you're lovers relationship is standing strong, now into the relationship that you think could last a whole lifetime. An eternity even. You're relationship is so healthy that you start to take up the others hobbies hoping to get even closer (if it was possible) to that person. You find yourself giving and recieving more knee-poppers than ever before. The more time spent together the better. You just can't get enough of this person. You continue to spend as much time with this person as possible. You get closer somehow, maybe even moving in together. The closer you get ther better. You find soon one lonely night without your lover breaks your heart. They start to spend less time with you than you'd prefer and they give you an excuse that you know is true, but you're lover may not. You find yourself with more free time, and less time with your lover.
    You and your lover have grown apart slowly. You don't notice at first but you begin to see it as time passes. You receive less knee-poppers, but give as much as you used to. Without spending every minute with your lover you find more free time to spend with your friends who you've been neglecting for the previous period of time. Your lover was like a hypnotist you will say and they will reply solemnly. It seems your friends have lost interest, too. You speak to your lover about this and they get upset. They think you would rather gab with your friends than spend time with them. And there it is. Your first fight. You panic. Your star-cros'd lover is drifting farther apart by the second. The threads of fate are becoming unraveled and your parallel destinys have seemed to have ran off track. Your relationship drifts farther and farther away during each fight. You find fights are replacing your knee-poppers and that your relationship is quickly coming to an end.
    You spend seldom time with your lover. They seem to have no interest in you whatsoever and you decide to give the other space and maybe things will work out, so you move farther away.
    You spend no time with your lover anymore. Your soul grows weak and fragil and you find no love inside. The love is gone and isn't coming back. Your star-cros'd lover is gone, they have found a new lover. You think to yuorself it's your fault, you should've paid more attention to them. You could've mended the relationship, but didn't. Now inside there is a gaping black hole. Love was once there but has gone. You think you will never be healed, no other love will happen to you again. And if there is another, who could it be? There are no other star-cros'd lovers in this universe. You do not fill this whole. You simply pick up the debirs left there by your broken heart. Now that your heart is gone there is nothing left to hope for, to live for. You repeat the phrase I'd die without you. And would you really die?It seems like it as you are alone. You have no lover. Your friends have left you and nothing seems to be going right. There is nothing in your life that can fix this mysterious emotion. It can be the greatest, or the worse. You have felt wonderful and now you feel downright melancholy. What is this? Why does it torture me like this? It is love , but love has played it's evil trick on my soul. Everyone tells you to cheer, up there are more lovers out there and you will find a new star-crosser soon. You take their advice but not to heart. You are forced to fake a smile, a laugh everyday of your life. You think why love anyway? Love will trick me once again. But think of it this way:Your heart can't possibly break when it wasn't even whole to start with.




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      ...you really poured out your heart on this. i guess you should have sticked with the 'I' word cause it's about you, but anyway, that helped the reader connect with what you wrote. i was a bit surprised about the content at your age, but, oh well, it's to be expected already in this generation.honestly, i got into the things you've said.i actually felt i was on your feet. it is a strange emotion..there're still big things to hope for, eventually, getting over won't be that hard..^_^..thanks for sharing.take care.
    | Posted on 2006-04-20 00:00:00 | by raineces | [ Reply to This ]


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