yeah i'm not in to this poem very much it's just not something i like."Me in a nutshell; If I wasnít allergic to nuts, that is I guess thatís how life goes." what is this supposed to mean??? That is one of the only parts in the poem that was totally and completely unclear it's just something that i didn't get. well later.kiss.kiss.
Hey, it wasn't that bad. At least you had a message there. Not written brilliantly, I think you sound muddled. What was your main theme? The fact that Easter has a lack of symbolic meaning or that you are searching for your own identity? Regardless, I got the questioning nature of the poem. good luck for next time.