when the dream is over -------------------------------------------
pleas don't cry
I'm not saying good-bye
we have something good between us
something we could never find again
but the dream is over
here the end of the play
go and find another love
you will be better that way
I 'm not talking about leave you behind
or I ganna find ..some one new
the words can't get out of my mouth
but you mast know the true
I don't have the heart
who can really love you
me life not the dream
that I can share with you
oh... how long it take before you see
that you spending your life
try to minding the breaking's in me
I'm shadows of man
and I want you free
pleas..
don't wasted your feelings on me
now why you cry ?
you don't know how it like
to see a tear in your eyes
if you know just how much my pain
I thought thees heart
would never feel again
I thought that no one
can brake a broking heart
just do what you have to do
go find some one to love
who can really love you to
just go on your way..
and don't look back at me
and don't worry ...
I will be all right
and trust me you will be fine
you will find ..
all the love that you fell for me
waiting in some one some place you will be
and you wlll live your life ,happy and free
open your eyes and you will see..
that is you destiny
but if you ever ganna heard my name
or glans me in the face of your child
you will think of me and smile
remember the way we use to be
so pleas go ..
and take with only the good memory
and I will be always thankful
for all the love that you give for me
Wow beautiful just check on the spelling My favorite part: just go on your way.. and don't look back at meand don't worry ...I will be all right and trust me you we'll be fine you we'll find ..all the love that you fell for me waiting in some one some place you well be and you well live your life ,happy and freeopen your eyes and you we'll see..that is you destiny
Heartbreaking, I swear mine still is. Oh god, the pain of a loved one leaving. I should know, I've felt it many times. You've a wonderful poem, a good read but you must work on your spelling.
This poem had a good thought to it, but some gramatical errors that running a spell check could have fixed. Over all, it is very good and has a excellent story line.
this is a really good poem i also agree that some sort of tune would be good here...also the spelling errors made spme parts difficult to understand but it has a lot of emotion and unfortunately i relate well to what ur saying in this poem...it was wonderful keep writing...just double check spelling before postin :)
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