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    dots Submission Name: To a Dear Frienddots
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    Author: Abby Sinthetic
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 177/230/53
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 867
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 499



    Description:
       Poem about a friend. Nothing more.


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    dotsTo a Dear Frienddots
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    Morose
    Cyanide girl
    Mordant
    Dangerous

    She assumes
    She is born to lose
    And she'll kill herself
    Before she has a chance
    A Plague.
    She is stubborn and against herself.

    But she is good
    -because she tries not to be
    She is a well- of talent and dreams
    -Loyalty and love
    With hidden abilities.
    She is-Cherished.




    Submitted on 2006-04-16 10:14:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yak Yak Yakkedy Yak Yak Yak Yak,.... Blah BlaH bLaH... okay anyhow this is actually really good *clap clap*... I do like the beginning, simple one word lines... its a good break up of words if you know what I mean... alright then *kiss*
    | Posted on 2006-07-02 00:00:00 | by morbidkittie | [ Reply to This ]
      True friendship is a very special thing and real true friends stand by you no matter come what may. I enjoyed reading your tribute to a friend.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-04-16 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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