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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 482
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 850



    Description:
       for the rythm part, most of it was inspired by eazy, but the lyrics are very clearly all mine...


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    times is gettin hard its time to pop some seals
    still on the deuce, when I'm poppin my pills
    shrooms are on the low, weed is on the top
    acid on the grab, if I feel I need to drop
    crown royal in my hand with a bag in my pocket
    tattoo of a crown, all the kings gotta rock it
    I gotta get my hustle on, in this place where I'm at
    in the ARK you gotta watch your back
    show stopin, no dropin, we in the place to be
    on the grind, all the time, with texas THC
    went to the party, and the bass was bumping
    smokin weed, buy O.Z. and smoke something
    goin into the house, where I buyin my shit
    I gotta get high, but soon I'm gonna quit
    go up in the door, I hear somebody say freeze
    the cops shot me in the chest, now I'm dyin on my knees




    Submitted on 2006-04-16 11:42:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ok this is the best one of urs that i've read lately. all the drug references went really well with ur flow on this one. the part about the cops shooting u is a bit unbelievable. they usually won't shoot u just for having drugs. u kinda have to seem a threat
    | Posted on 2006-04-25 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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