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    dots Submission Name: DOAdots
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    Author: ParanoidParadox
    ASL Info:    20/m/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 85/76/32
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 337
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       Wrote this awhile ago with a friend, decided to post it


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    dotsDOAdots
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    All these roads remain unseen
    All these hands remain unclean
    All these travels are to be
    All these journeys flee the scene

    I find myself here again
    Don't mourn for me, already damned

    All these streetlights flicker off
    All these trips without a stop
    All these memory still-frames
    All these injuries sustained

    I find myself here again
    Don’t mourn for me, already damned

    All these buildings: abandoned
    All these structures: still standing

    Needle takes me from consciousness
    Downward-spiral reality
    Forgetting all my callousness
    Chaos in my soliloquy

    This place forsaken but I remain




    Submitted on 2006-04-16 15:22:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this. It is simple, but something that many people can relate to. The title is fitting. I like it when people don't use a line from the actual poem to title the work. It makes you think.
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2006-04-16 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]



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