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    dots Submission Name: Mothers -reviseddots
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    Author: Leala
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 245/299/70
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Thanks so much to hyproglo for all of your wonderful help! I really appreciate it. Also thanks to orange for the technical help!! <3

    I think I've got it folks!! Any other suggestions?


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

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    Mothers;
    biological and spiritual,
    Women
    amazing and beautiful.

    Guiding with care.
    picking you up after falls
    over all the obstacles
    they have warned will come.
    With a slight smile
    and a shake of the head;
    thinking gently “they’ll learn.”

    Many mothers have graced me,
    all cherished and adored.
    Coming, going.
    Staying by my side.
    Either way, impacting my life.

    Minds in auto
    forget all but the biological
    when the spiritual
    deserve as much thanks

    I thank all my mothers.
    Even the ones who didn’t realize
    how much they meant
    to this growing spirit.




    Submitted on 2006-04-16 16:55:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hmm i cna tell tha you love your mother and im also taking away that your close to other peoples mothers as well. I thin k yu did good and you realy captured most of what a mother is. THe reason i said most is because i dont feel that you can truly capture how great a mother can be and fit it into one poem. You did a good job though.

    ~Gena~
    | Posted on 2006-04-16 00:00:00 | by luvy | [ Reply to This ]
      Mothers;
    biological and spiritual,
    Women
    amazing an <b>d</b> beautiful.

    Many mothers have graced me,
    all cherished and adored.
    <b>C</b>oming, going.
    Staying by my side.
    Either way <b>,</b> impacting my life.

    a few typos, or maybe they were meant to be that way... you asked, I commented.

    Good luck with this one, it is powerful.
    | Posted on 2006-04-17 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      Awww...now this definately worked out to be a great tribute to all mothers and I am sure will bring a tear to the eyes of all the motherly types in your life. Yeah, I think you got it!
    Nice stuff maynard!
    | Posted on 2006-04-17 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Being a Mother myself, I'll have to say this is a beautiful Masterpiece!
    Any Mother would feel special and hold this poem near her heart where she feels the most emotions.
    Although, I will have to say I felt a little bit of emotion in my eyes as well while reading your tribute to "Mothers".
    A poem well written!
    ~Linda
    | Posted on 2006-04-19 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]



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