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Vancouver


Author: mrmundane
ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
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Words: 163
Class/Type: Poetry /
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about the rainy, wet, cloudy winter


Vancouver



Drilling downwards the rain trills
Drying the lips of pedestrian swells
Forcing them home with tired eyes
Turning them into shells

A spliffed saturation detracts
Leaves distant the leaves of desks
Murals erased which defaced
The face of corporal incorporateness

Teeth jitter under stress
The news remains a stick
Blood on wrists shows they lived
The angel of virtue forgives

Tease lattes air of grey
Everyone reeks of debt
Shackle and clacks tracks of day
A Skytrain stradles slats

Schoolyards summon children come
The sound calls from under reign
They grit their teeth and fall inline
Into a trailer with chilled wet brains

They trace the carpet in tiny rocks
Castings of granite teeth grinding through socks
Eggs of serpents in their boots
Stolen candy from their thoughts

Sails have set to other seasons
When skies reveal cobalt seas
A hidden feeling becomes renewed
They'll soon forget these rain filled days
When mortal hearts had blued




Submitted on 2006-04-16 21:35:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Your imagery is awsome...the flow is a bit off but it is a very good read...doesnt make me want to vacation there though :)....i loved the first stanza ....
AL
| Posted on 2006-04-17 00:00:00 | by Amanda Lynn | [ Reply to This ]


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