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    dots Submission Name: The Monkeydots
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    Author: Th_Plonk
    Elite Ratio:    6.38 - 41/41/10
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Childrens
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    Description:
       My brother Nyaminche and I wrote this one for Vriesia, our sister when we were quite small. It is less of a song than a chant - meant to be performed for a specific audience as either a round, or in unison for as long as is necessary to produce the required emotional effect. Usually some sort of interpretive dance is also involved. Audience participation is key.

    When we finished this one, Nyaminche and I were almost absurdly proud of it. We still are, really.


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    dotsThe Monkeydots
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    The Monkey

    Monkey on the road
    Monkey on the road
    He's making funny fa-aces
    (Monkey on the road)
    He's making 'em at you.




    Submitted on 2006-04-17 01:55:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nothing's too deep for kids... look at the nursery rhymes they already have, like "Ring-a-rosy" and such. Children are far more aware and receptive than many people give them credit for.

    Now, we can either take this at face value or we can impose our own interpretations. I like imposing. The monkey often represents the wild or the primitive -- and since, if you're not a creationist, we're supposed to be fairly closely linked, then they can also stand for the childhood version of humankind. By that reading I get a message that in growing up (or evolving) we're forgetting the most important thing: how to laugh at ourselves. We consider others objects of ridicule and somehow think we're above that ourselves. So the monkey pulling funny faces is a reminder that at our most primitive level we are capable of something too often debased by our "learned" culture: humour.

    Play, absurdity, silliness -- all are frowned on by those who have "grown up". I would postulate that their growing up is nothing more than imposing artificial notions of what is acceptable, and living on terms dictated by some amorphous other. But then, I don't much feel like growing up, so I'm probably biased...
    | Posted on 2006-05-06 00:00:00 | by Fantastic Freya | [ Reply to This ]
      trully remarkable--I am utterly speachless. I can not dare express a word of correction to such a chant---I can hear it--Monkey on the roaaaaaaaad
    monkey on the roooooooad
    he's making fuuuuuny faaaaaaaaaces
    monkey on the road
    he's making em' at you
    yeah

    heavan sent masterpiece
    lamemansterms
    | Posted on 2006-04-17 00:00:00 | by LameMansTerms | [ Reply to This ]
      I must admit this one is rather deep
    perhaps too deep for children, It
    immediately brings to mind a work
    by the Beatles (Why don’t we do it in the Road)
    and like in that song this one leads to many
    permutations of thought, initially it brings
    to mind the image of a monkey in the road
    making faces, but as I read it over and over
    I seem to be transported to primeval jungles,
    teaming with reptilian horrors, I see Monkeys
    who learn to shape and form tools, its like
    a haze of epochs has lifted from my mind
    and long dormant racial memories have been
    unleashed, I see parrots in panic, stalking tigers
    gazelles fleeing in terror, I behold golden
    glowing funguses with lipid sheen and vegetation
    so green it gleams and through it all there
    are always the staring eyes of a gesticulating
    primate. Oh and I would not change a thing
    in this one it is perfect, I am just not sure I
    would give over the power of these words
    to a child.

    | Posted on 2006-04-17 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]



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