this is really good, and i'm really glad to have read it.
i'm having a hard time right now on this site to even find something to say and i'm glad i can say something about this piece.
first off, i would like to say that i've always loved the word "sanctuary"
and i'm glad someone wrote something of it,
and didn't do a crappy job at it.
Sitting here for hours
In this sanctuary above clouds
The breeze from here is so gentle
Giving off the sweetest of sounds
i feel that almost every time i Really try to breathe in my life.
and it's good to see you're using a variety of words.
this probably isn't good feedback because i'm just babbling...
Hey, how is everything with you? This was so awesome there was so much peace to it, and I totally know what you mean....I have these days every now and then when nothing goes wrong. I'll have to read alot more of yours then, I've been all lazy with that but I'm here now aren't I? anyway I really really liked this one. a definate faves add. love ya, jess
Such a lovely and relaxing piece. I just felt so serene whilest reading this. Very nice rhyme scheme, it didn't sound too forced or anything which really help the feeling. The flow as well helped. Nice structure, it helped tie everything together very well. I really enjoyed the imagery in this piece, it brought me back to a few nice memories of just being ultimately relaxed. I think my favorite lines had to be the last stanza. Such a lovely ending. Great job, keep writing