you know what from all the poem i have read this one stands very different, this is unique poem, since you are the first person who has written about your craving. not many people like to write something personal.
i am very lonely but was never able to accept it so innocently, sometimes every second is sacary without someone, my someone is a girl whom i proposed but was rejected and whole world came falling over me. Sometimes at sunsets and when her thougths light a candle in my mind, i feel so incomplete. and sometime a want to get over this beautiful helplessness and maybe find someone to fulfil me. Maybe i can feel the craving to be wanted, to find someone waiting for me, someone who is there when i cry, someone who can feel proud to be with me, maybe someday i will find someone who will be waiting for me, watching me in her dreams.
I want to be that pillow that you hug so tightly I want that sparkle in your eye I want to be the reason that you smile But not the reason that you cry...
well these were my fav lines and i think you understand why.
Raivn...this is absolutely...without a doubt....my favorite of all the poems that you have ever written! I can totally relate to this right now! My heart and stomach felt so odd while reading this. I love it. I like the way it was written. Good rhyme. Great write. It's definately going on my favorites list.