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    dots Submission Name: Nighttime in the AAMdots
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    Author: oixi
    ASL Info:    50/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 196/242/97
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       Composed after I visited the Asian Art Museum in San Francisco, wondering what happens after nightfall. Let me know what you think.


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    They rest in darkness—idle art;
    These relics worn, a faded past.
    Spirits rising from stone impart
    Tales of lore stirring aghast.

    The halls are closed, no one about;
    Specters born of ancient rock.
    Museum shut, but without a doubt,
    Shadows there begin to flock.

    From Buddha with a missing head,
    And bodistava that has no arms.
    Apparitions of long time dead
    Arise in pitch with ghostly charms.

    They wander through the blackened halls;
    Smoke rising from a hidden flame.
    Demons ascend when darkness calls;
    Loosed from artifacts without shame.

    Before the dawn and coming light,
    Phantoms return to their hidden way.
    Statues still after haunting night;
    Museum ready for business day.





    Submitted on 2006-04-17 17:54:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is very nice...i love the thought of the art comming to life....you worded it very well and the imagery was nice .....i love the third stanza..
    AL
    | Posted on 2006-04-17 00:00:00 | by Amanda Lynn | [ Reply to This ]



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