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    dots Submission Name: Little Thoughtsdots
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    Author: darkwinged
    ASL Info:    17/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 184/217/74
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 993
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 90



    Description:
       Honestly, don't ask. We are doing this project in my computer class, and I needed a short poem to put in it. So I came up with this one...or at least, similar to it.

    Just something fresh!


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    dotsLittle Thoughtsdots
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    Roses are red
    They also are black
    This is my poem
    Now I want a snack.




    Submitted on 2006-04-18 12:30:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      u are so true to ur word. (little thoughts)
    wish u kud see me now...
    i was :( all day long
    but now i am :)

    keep up the LITTLE works-hehe
    | Posted on 2006-04-25 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]
      "Roses are red
    They also are black"

    Aint that the truth?
    But no matter what color, I love roses They're so pretty.

    That last line made me laugh... and wish I had a cookie. lol

    Great job

    Byee

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2006-04-18 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      rotf! I love that.It was pretty dang funny.

    I juts like..started laughing. I was like "ahahah"
    and then i was like :|


    because i got hungry too.

    uh oh.

    cute poem! loved it! xD xD xD
    | Posted on 2006-04-18 00:00:00 | by leadpencil | [ Reply to This ]


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