Little Thoughts by darkwinged

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Submission Name: Little Thoughts dots

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Author:	darkwinged
ASL Info:	17/F/MI
Elite Ratio:	3.61 - 184/217/74
Words:	16

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	993
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	90

Description:
Honestly, don't ask. We are doing this project in my computer class, and I needed a short poem to put in it. So I came up with this one...or at least, similar to it.

Just something fresh!

Little Thoughts dots

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Roses are red
They also are black
This is my poem
Now I want a snack.

Submitted on 2006-04-18 12:30:06 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  u are so true to ur word. (little thoughts)
wish u kud see me now...
i was :( all day long
but now i am :)

keep up the LITTLE works-hehe
| Posted on 2006-04-25 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]
  "Roses are red
They also are black"

Aint that the truth?
But no matter what color, I love roses They're so pretty.

That last line made me laugh... and wish I had a cookie. lol

Great job

Byee

-nikkki
| Posted on 2006-04-18 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
  rotf! I love that.It was pretty dang funny.

I juts like..started laughing. I was like "ahahah"
and then i was like :|

because i got hungry too.

uh oh.

cute poem! loved it! xD xD xD
| Posted on 2006-04-18 00:00:00 | by leadpencil | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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