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    dots Submission Name: I wish for youdots
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    Author: Cai
    ASL Info:    17/f/MA
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 1162/401/71
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 231
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    dotsI wish for youdots
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    When I start to scratch the walls at night
    Looking for a way out
    Without letting anyone in,
    I wish for you

    When I cry myself to sleep
    Wondering if I'm crazy
    Hidden beneath a mask of sanity,
    I wish for you

    When I take the pills in my desk drawers
    Trying to escape from
    A world I've lost connection with,
    I wish for you

    I wish for you to pull me out of this mess
    I wish for you to just give me a hand
    I ask for your help
    But I cannot find you because I don't believe in you.




    Submitted on 2006-04-18 20:40:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey, this was a good strong write. Powerful in the content. It got to me, coz I see it everyday between my pals. I loved the repitition and ending. Great read. hope to read more.


    Soph
    | Posted on 2006-04-26 00:00:00 | by Soph | [ Reply to This ]
      I really related to this, awesome write! this was as close to perfect as it could have been and I wouldn't change a thing. I just loved everything about this write, great wording, the ending was amazing, so yeah great write. I'll be sure to read some more from you soon.
    peace
    _ _
    _death_
    | Posted on 2006-04-23 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      Flippin heckers i can relate to this a lot....its really clever and i love how youve worded it......its really good....me loved it
    God Bless
    Take Care
    Lotsaluv
    Nadine
    | Posted on 2006-04-23 00:00:00 | by lostspirit | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, this was good. I can relate To this. It gave me a personal meaning. I enjoyed this very much so.
    -Christina aka POETRY
    | Posted on 2006-04-18 00:00:00 | by POETRY | [ Reply to This ]



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