sweet and kind -------------------------------------------
Sweet
Sweet and charming
Sweet and charming and cute
And sweet
And meek
And arrogant
And kind
And sweet
And kind
And sweet
And kind to me
And makes me laugh
Makes me smile
Makes me laugh and smile
And glow
And smile and glow
And smile and grow
To like him more
To like his eyes
To like his skin
To grow to like the him within
Within the time
Within the day
The time of day
I have to learn
I have to see
I have to learn and see the he
The he that’s sweet
And kind and sweet
And kind and meek
This arrogant he
That’s kind and cute
That’s kind to me
That makes me smile
That makes me glow
That makes me so very glad to know
him.
well. i shall be the first of many i'm sure to say this, but it was a little repetitive. as a poet, one would tend to stray away from monotony, and tend more towards imagery and making the reader (or recipient as the case may be) feel the emotion you are attempting to convey. it sounds like the writer has very strong feelings towards someone, however, i sense a bit of apprehension. perhaps its my imagination, though.
you know, i really liked the short fast beat of it..like jumbled thoughts unravelling all at once. i dont even really mind the repetition of Sweet and Kind....however, all the And's is what is a bit of a turn off for me. this whole write is about repetition, and i dont mind most of them...like the I Have, To Know, That Makes sentences...if you could cut out all those Ands i think this would be very upbeat and enjoyable to read
Submission Name: sweet and kind
